I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Summer Its Naomi. Yes I do like your pictre. Lovely colour. perhaps next time you could add something about why you chose that and what it reminds you of . Stay safe
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
it is kharli from room1
ReplyDeleteHi Summer Its Naomi. Yes I do like your pictre. Lovely colour. perhaps next time you could add something about why you chose that and what it reminds you of
ReplyDelete. Stay safe