I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ore Summer. what I like about your post is the picture you used for your background and the words you used. Next time change the color of the writing because it is hard to read. form your bff Sadia.
kia ora summer its me aisha I like the way you did all that you are a very kind and Treat others as they want to be treated even you are a very kind Kaitiakitanga you did good effort in your work Next time you should do a No bullying or somthing else Good examples of how to behave
Hello! Summer this is Aisha i like that you put a good exmaple and put all reasons of how you are going to behave I really appreciate how you did your work perfectly next time you should do a a card for your besties or for your family
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
kia ora
ReplyDeletethis fritz sheppard i like your slide
ReplyDeleteKia ore Summer. what I like about your post is the picture you used for your background and the words you used. Next time change the color of the writing because it is hard to read. form your bff Sadia.
ReplyDeletekia ora summer its me aisha
ReplyDeleteI like the way you did all that you are a very kind and Treat others as they want to be treated even you are a very kind Kaitiakitanga you did good effort in your work
Next time you should do a No bullying or somthing else
Good examples of how to behave
I like your one to and I like your photo Margaret
ReplyDeletehi summer this is one of the best that iv'e seen
ReplyDeleteHi summer this is gloria i like how you used very neat words
ReplyDeleteTena koe Summer,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful first post! Some brilliant ideas for rules. I had a bit of a problem reading the last few ideas because of the colour & picture.
hi summer it me Namoe from room 1
ReplyDeletei like your blog post i
hope you enjouy bloging
for the rest of the yaer
hi sammr i like your sade
ReplyDeleteHello! Summer this is Aisha
ReplyDeletei like that you put a good exmaple and put all reasons of how you are going to behave
I really appreciate how you did your work perfectly
next time you should do a a card for your besties or for your family
hi sammr i like your sade
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